We’ve been working on the edits of the Evenfall rewrites this weekend. We broke the book into quadrants so we’ve been working on different chapters. I’m editing a scene in Evenfall chapter 22, and I cannot tell you how much I want to write something in dialogue I really just can’t do. But if I can’t stick it in story, at least I can blog about it.
Behind a cut for spoilers in Evenfall chapter 22.
Two separate conversations, yesterday and today.
Ais: good idea to use scrivener
Santino: i know im so smart
dont you wish you were this smart
Ais: every moment of my life
Santino: too bad
Ais: i know
i should probably just kill myself and let you do all the editing yourself
Santino: you are emo
Ais: lol i thought you were going to say “Okay, Boyd”
Ais: it wouldnt bother you if i did that?
sweet im totally doing that
Santino: why would i care
Santino: i care about barely anything
im basically boyd
Santino: but ghetto
Poor Boyd. He gets no respect.
(Not So Very) Important Conversations, or NSVIC, are excerpts from joking conversations Sonny and I had during the process of writing, editing, or otherwise working on ICoS.
This one is a joke about Fade’s epilogue, and even though I don’t think it contains spoilers past mid-Afterimage I’m still putting it behind a cut just in case.