WRITING: Evenfall revisions, excerpt: chapter 24

An excerpt from the Evenfall revisions. You will have to click on it to make it full screen. Sorry for the large size.

evenfall revisions old vs new ch24

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2 thoughts on “WRITING: Evenfall revisions, excerpt: chapter 24

  1. Lorraine March 21, 2014 / 8:44 pm

    Wonderful revisions! It adds much to the story to see them both display some vulnerability to each other at this point in the story.

    • Ais March 21, 2014 / 9:09 pm

      Thank you, Lorraine! Yeah I’m hoping the revisions will help highlight even more the important steps/progress made in their relationship/interaction

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