2 thoughts on “WRITING: Evenfall revisions, excerpt: chapter 24

  1. Lorraine March 21, 2014 / 8:44 pm

    Wonderful revisions! It adds much to the story to see them both display some vulnerability to each other at this point in the story.

    • Ais March 21, 2014 / 9:09 pm

      Thank you, Lorraine! Yeah I’m hoping the revisions will help highlight even more the important steps/progress made in their relationship/interaction

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